Owww.... I was so happy writing a christmas poem and everything and then this page crashed :(
Well... I guess I can at least post the song I was listening to while I wrote it :)
Thats a shame. I would have truly liked to read it. Your other poems are beautiful and I'm sure this one would have been too.
I wrote a poem myself late last night. Been wondering whether I should show you and I think I should cause maybe it gets across how I feel better than normal words. Here it is...
SOMEONE ON MY MIND
As I lay awake at night Thoughts run through my head Words that had been spoken Things that had been left unsaid
My dreams are no longer a comfort No longer an escape From the problems around me From the worries of the day
Cause theres someone on my mind Who doesn't seem to sleep Whatever I'm thinking She's never far behind
She follows me around So fiery yet so sweet In her white dressing gown She makes me feel complete
But I've been too eager Too eager to please Thats driven her to anger And caused our love to freeze
I wish it was just a story Something that wasn't real That I could sweep to one side But I can't help the way I feel
I sense her pulling away Leaving me far behind To rot in a pit of despair Thats where I must stay
The gap begins to widen I hope I don't trip and fall I ain't no cartoon villain I care too much...thats all
1 Comments:
At 26 December 2010 at 15:02 ,
Anonymous said...
Thats a shame. I would have truly liked to read it. Your other poems are beautiful and I'm sure this one would have been too.
I wrote a poem myself late last night. Been wondering whether I should show you and I think I should cause maybe it gets across how I feel better than normal words. Here it is...
SOMEONE ON MY MIND
As I lay awake at night
Thoughts run through my head
Words that had been spoken
Things that had been left unsaid
My dreams are no longer a comfort
No longer an escape
From the problems around me
From the worries of the day
Cause theres someone on my mind
Who doesn't seem to sleep
Whatever I'm thinking
She's never far behind
She follows me around
So fiery yet so sweet
In her white dressing gown
She makes me feel complete
But I've been too eager
Too eager to please
Thats driven her to anger
And caused our love to freeze
I wish it was just a story
Something that wasn't real
That I could sweep to one side
But I can't help the way I feel
I sense her pulling away
Leaving me far behind
To rot in a pit of despair
Thats where I must stay
The gap begins to widen
I hope I don't trip and fall
I ain't no cartoon villain
I care too much...thats all
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